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Bowser's Dungeon of Words

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[Jan. 29th, 2005|11:13 pm]
Bowser's Dungeon of Words

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I haven't written a poem in forever, but here's the one I just finished:


"While you thought I was sleeping"

I remember when you’d play me music.
From beneath my sheets,
from behind my room’s walls,
my ears would catch a melody,
lightly speaking hm hmm hm,
born from the clacking
of white ivory.
Each finger,
a catalyst of audible beauty,
stroked the machine,
hoping to coax out
a warming note.
They were carried to me
upon bottle rockets,
magnificently exploding,
putting on a startlingly grand
show for my tired body.
And I felt I could lay here forever,
with my bed turned to green grass
and ceiling, newly of sparkling stars,
and never grow tired of the
music you’d play
while you thought I was sleeping.
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[User Picture]From: pedestrian101
2005-01-30 05:08 am (UTC)
some of the images a little bit confusing (prolly cuz i dont know what was playing in yuor mind) but the imaging is great.
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